Sigh. That was fabulous, indeed. Oh, I was practically in tears watching Crowley beat himself up like that, and all because Azzi got scared of his feelings! I really loved the conversation with God at the end- it was exactly how I was hoping things would end up (my train of thought: Oh, noes! Azzi not an angel?? He'd better be redeemed by the purity of his love! Crowley, too, for that matter...). Anyway, just had to review, because I so thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Only grammatical thing I have to note is to watch your "then"s and "than"s (better than; and then), and the formatting made it a little tough to follow paragraph breaks (I suggest double spacing between each paragraph when you can't indent). I only mention these because the editor in me nitpicks. Thanks again for the fabulous fic!

You finished it and it's wonderful! That was an intense emotional roller coaster ride but it was well written and ended so happily that I can't complain for the heart-ache earlier. ;) The only miniscule criticsm I have is that I don't think Aziraphale would call Crowley "Anthony" in intimate moments. I get the impression from the book that Crowley is his real name and Anthony was taken on for convenience, so it wouldn't mean so much to be said at such a time. Just my two cents, I hope you don't mind. Still an amazing story. Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response: I hope you liked it! Usually I write much more happy-go-lucky smut, but something new never hurts. You're right about the "Anthony" thing. I'll try to think of another term of endearment.

You've GOT to keep going with this. I'm absolutely dying to know how this all turns out in the end. :D

Author's Response: Thank you,I hope you find the ending satisfactory.

Oh, this is so painful to read! But probably a lot more realistic than the two of them just falling into bed together as happens in a lot of other stories. I hope you won't keep us in suspense for long!